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Ohme
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0 posted 1999-11-14 07:25 PM


You Touched Me

and so gentle was your touch,
I was completely unaware of your presence.
Then you touched me.
And I felt a velvet whisper
that nudged so very, very
gently on my skin.
Again you touched me.
And I saw you.
Then I wished that you would touch me
many, many times again.
For when you touch me
you touch me deep within my soul
and I am moved.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 1999-11-14 07:31 PM


Beautiful Ohme! A touch can come from air and be air, yet move much.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-14 07:39 PM


Very beautiful, Ohme!

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Denise


Isis
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3 posted 1999-11-14 08:07 PM


A touch can mean so much, and you touched me with this poem.

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Ohme
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4 posted 1999-11-14 08:13 PM


Thanks for reading and commenting Denise.

Thank you Isis. As a poet, I also want to place a touch that is felt and not felt at the same time.

Martie, I think at times the gentlest touch can have the greatest effect.

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-11-14 09:59 PM


This poem touched me...nicely spoken

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2008-04-26 08:18 AM



In loving memory this day of Ina Lorene Meadows~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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