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You Touched Me

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Ohme
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0 posted 11-14-1999 07:25 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

You Touched Me

and so gentle was your touch,
I was completely unaware of your presence.
Then you touched me.
And I felt a velvet whisper
that nudged so very, very
gently on my skin.
Again you touched me.
And I saw you.
Then I wished that you would touch me
many, many times again.
For when you touch me
you touch me deep within my soul
and I am moved.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
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Beautiful Ohme! A touch can come from air and be air, yet move much.
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Very beautiful, Ohme!

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Denise

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A touch can mean so much, and you touched me with this poem.

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~Isis~
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Ohme
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Thanks for reading and commenting Denise.

Thank you Isis. As a poet, I also want to place a touch that is felt and not felt at the same time.

Martie, I think at times the gentlest touch can have the greatest effect.
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This poem touched me...nicely spoken

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

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In loving memory this day of Ina Lorene Meadows~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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