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The Poet's Pen (Shakespearean Sonnet?)

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Denise
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25 posted 11-16-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Nan, Pepper and Severn! I am so glad that you all think this is good! I never thought I would be able to write a sonnet! I changed the second line altogether! Got rid of that pesky word granules! Thanks again for all you help!

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Denise

Elizabeth Santos
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26 posted 11-16-1999 09:06 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This one should stay at the top of the list so we can read it over and over. Quite a talented poet, you are Denise.
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27 posted 11-16-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

What they said , and more .But how much creedence can you give to a "stuter"?
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28 posted 11-16-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Elizabeth- you are so sweet! Thank you!
Dr.Moose- Thanks so much! (I thought you escaped that nut house!)

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