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Such a sweet caress (repost)

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Munda
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0 posted 11-14-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

It was such a sweet caress
on that weary dreary day
longing for my bonnie lass
solemn grief ate me away

On that weary dreary day
Death came passing by my door
solemn grief ate me away
heartache mine forever more

Death came passing by my door
looking at my soppy eyes
heartache mine forever more
bonnie lass she just had died

looking at my soppy eyes
feeling sorry in a way
bonnie lass she just had died
said "this is your lucky day"

feeling sorry in a way
her kiss cold yet sweet to me
said "this is your lucky day,
your sweet bonnie lass you’ll see"

her kiss cold yet sweet to me
longing for my bonnie lass
"your sweet bonnie lass you’ll see"
it was such a sweet caress

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 11-14-1999 05:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Munda,
Hard to do but you did it well.
Ohme
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2 posted 11-14-1999 06:00 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Oh, Munda, you didn't skip class. But I think I must have. This is lovely. And no, I couldn't do it.

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hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 11-15-1999 08:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done Munda, remember this one from before
Munda
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4 posted 11-16-1999 03:59 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Seymour, Ruth, thank you. : ) : )

Ohme, but I must skip one round. I have no time ! LOL Thanks. : )
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