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Lucie
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0 posted 11-14-1999 04:31 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Do not judge me in this desperate time of need.
If you know a better way, take my hand and lead.
I may not do things now with which you would agree.
Take a minute to imagine I am you and you are me.

Do you feel a sense of hopelessness at all?
Do you know that you need help, but who to call?
Do you feel the need to just curl up and cry?
Know that you should get up, but canít remember why?

You have moments of lucidity and strength.
They are few and far between, not long in length.
Whatís the matter donít you like this game of switch?
Let me tell you what you told meÖ lifeís a *itch.

Sometimes just having faith is not enough.
When the path on which you walk is getting rough.
Sometimes you need your friends to help you through.
One thing that I learned from this, I can not count on you.

So now that you have stepped into my place.
You canít wait to get away, I see it in your face.
Here Iíll help you, reach out and take my hand.
Iíve been there, where you areÖ I understand.


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Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.
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Munda
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since 10-08-1999
Posts 3629
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1 posted 11-14-1999 05:26 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Unfortunately this is so true Lucie....been there too and understand. Very well done. : )
Lucie
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2 posted 11-14-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thank you Munda for your response. Its good to know someone knows how I feel.
Ohme
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3 posted 11-14-1999 07:28 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Very good, Lucy. Chances are, a lot of us understand.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
Denise
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4 posted 11-14-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good, Lucie! I enjoyed this! Many lessons within!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 11-14-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I like this
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