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An Interlude to Remember

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Ohme
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0 posted 11-14-1999 01:15 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

An Interlude To Remember

Though I would dwell amid the love
that beckons from your eyes,
as I would bask beneath the sun
that warms the summer skies.
Let me not drink a toast of all
the tears that I would shed
remembering an unkind word
from anything you said.
Abide with me this interlude
and let our time unfold
then as you speak, I'll listen
and your thoughts I will behold.
But if the interlude should pass,
I'm left with only time,
I will not think these precious thoughts
are nothing more than mine.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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1 posted 11-14-1999 03:25 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Ohme, this is really beautiful, I love the way it flows.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


RobertB
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2 posted 11-14-1999 04:22 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

I liked the way you worked towards the ending..I could feel it coming!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
hoot_owl_rn
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Very beautiful Ohme
Sally S.
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4 posted 11-15-1999 09:19 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I agree, this is truly a beautiful poem.
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