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The Dove

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jennysbeau1
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Cornelius, Oregon, USA


0 posted 11-13-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for jennysbeau1   Email jennysbeau1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jennysbeau1

This is a poem I wrote about forever love
it's for my angel Jennifer......


The Dove

Far off and away
in a land called forever,
There stands a rock
immense as ever.

A thousand miles wide
and just as deep,
This is a rock
a thousand miles steep.

And once a milineum
a tiny dove takes flight,
and to this huge rock
this dove will alight.

He sharpens his beak
on this monster stone,
And then soars away
flying for home.

He flies to this rock
every one thousand years
to sharpen his beak
when a milineum nears.

And when this rock
thus has worn away,
Just a second of forever
has past that day.

So when I tell you
forever is my love,
Just close your eyes
and imagine the dove.

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Remember...write what you love..and love what you write...Terry
© Copyright 1999 jennysbeau1 - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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3 posted 11-14-1999 08:21 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I'm glad it got moved here, its lovely

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Michael
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4 posted 11-14-1999 08:35 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful poem.

Michael
Munda
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since 10-08-1999
Posts 3629
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5 posted 11-14-1999 05:57 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

So lovely.
Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
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6 posted 11-14-1999 07:19 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Very lovely poem....

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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7 posted 11-14-1999 07:21 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Unique way of putting it!
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