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The Path |
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JohnDoe82 Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 42MO, USA |
Two strangers meet along a path, In differences they did not lack, They could have passed each other by, Instead they thought it worth a try. His shyness for a while prevailed, Until his shell she had assailed, He opened up in time, and then, Tried not be like other men. At times they fought but made up soon, He acted strange beneath the moon, But now they are too far apart, And it is breaking both their hearts. Three months is coming very near, And to his heart she has grown dear, Tomorrow brings another day, And in his arms he hopes she'll stay. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
How could I have missed this one ? Liked it a lot ! : ) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
John, Enjoyed the read. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is good, John. I enjoyed reading this! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is sweet  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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