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Breath Of Spring
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Breath Of Spring |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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It's not spring....but oh well, we can wish for it, right?  A sunlit whisper's touch Shivering across my skin Breezes shifting Pastel feathered within the sky Color softly combines Melting into perfection Emotion filled mists float Soothing tender souls Antique roses climb Encircling spring boughs Scents so light, fresh Lifting my wintered heart Into silvered sunshine Cashmere wings of white Carry away the cold Along with my bitterness Leaving me free As the pearled blooms Destined to flower Within this newborn vision Now within the sweetness I simply exist as me And the renewed innocence I so gently breathe. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Exquisitely lovely piece my friend. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent, alwye. I also await spring. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Krista! A real breath of spring! ------------------ Denise |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Great poem, my friend. A lovely piece, I'll be waiting for spring, my favorite season, and your next piece. ------------------ "All is gone except the will to be." - Metallica - "For Whom the Bell Tolls" |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Alwye, this is really lovely, but hey, it's spring down in Austrailia and the other southern hemisphere countries, ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your imagery is perfection! Love this one, Alwye. We're entering fall here, which is just as lovely as spring for the rest of you! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well done, I really liked the final two lines, made the poem |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alwye - Brush strokes across the page. The portrait lovely. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful imagery Alwye "Cashmere wings of white".....gorgeous...! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all very much for your kindness. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Mystic Essence Junior Member
since 1999-09-29
Posts 28 |
Wonderful.. ------------------ My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
A graceful ode.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You did this to me on a REEEEEALLY cold day, Krista....  |
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