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Into the Wind |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Into the Wind ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh to bolt in the wind slack reins, unafraid of feeling the breeze in my hair again Breathing deep of the air and then run…run fast and far to you, with you Racing headlong into tomorrow's morning Hearts fast beating thrilled in speed Regrets are fleeting No looking back for what is indeed behind us is lost Mariah whispers to clandestine pain Run fast, run free unhand the reins Come with me… see destiny's eyes Captive no more touch freedom's sky Into the wind…you and I © caroline 1999 ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 11-13-1999).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Caroline, this is beautiful!!!  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Caroline...I really like this...I could feel the glory. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful...oh two in one day, yes! she's back |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Caroline, this is breathtakingly beautiful! Well done! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent job, Caroline. Including Mariah was genius. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Dark Angel, Julie, Denise...my humble thanks. You ladies brighten my world hoot--YES! *LOL* I'm back and up and still climbing...I never let anything beat me.. Might sit out a round, but I'll always be the winner  Thanks!Balladeer...*sigh* I'm speechless...you used the word genius in reference to one of my little scribblings...high praise from the best  Thank you, my friend, you've made my whole week!And Dream you sneaked in on me...a kiss on your cheek too ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 11-13-1999).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Nothing more needs be said, but echoes of the above. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
LOL To love a horse is a mighty thing indeed. I too know the feeling, it's like a drug to ride and be so powerful! Maybe I'll post my poem sometime soon called "To Drink The Wind" I wrote it last October after an exhilarating fall ride! Awesome poem Caroline! ~X~ ------------------ "The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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Lilli Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 21Melbourne, Australia |
OOOOH, more horsey people... I know that feeling so well, it's fantasic, and the way you wrote that made it seem like you could take it from a riding point of view, or thinking of a loved one. Great stuff ------------------ There's a pretty girl on the face of the magazine What I see is my dirty hands turning the page |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I love this one, Caroline. Exquisite piece. Michael |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
hmmm...horses? *LOL* I've not been on a horse for more than 20 years now...but once you mentioned it Angel...I could see why you would think it describes the ride! Please do post that poem though...I'd love to read it! Lilli~~ Thanks! You've got both ideas  Michael, coming from someone with your brilliant skills, I'm touched that you like this. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Caroline, this is beautiful. Mariah blows the words my way. Refreshing. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Most beautiful Caroline Glad you're back and with such wonderful gifts for us all to enjoy!! Loved the read.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 11-14-1999).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Poetry at its best Elizabeth |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very nice Caroline!!! I really enjoyed it... I especially liked "rushing to tomorrow's morning". (I hope I got that right!) Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
very nice, is this a horse or a vehicle of love? |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You have crafted the sense of freedom extraordinarily well, Caroline. Fantastic. |
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