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Unfaithful Love (Sonnet written for Nan's class)

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Ohme
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0 posted 11-13-1999 09:40 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

Unfaithful Love

The dark of night crept slowly from the east
and told of mysteries in quiet song
that spoke of love and laughter at a feast
the forest would enjoy all evening long.
But night embraced the chill of humid air
that left the forest cloaked in sorrow's sea.
The treachery of love now brought despair
and tears, the only wine, would ever be.
The forest wept throughout the dark of night
until it knew the pain would be undone.
Remembering the twilights silver light,
and salutations of the evening sun

gave promise that with dawn it would return
to dry the tears of dew upon the fern.



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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 11-13-1999 10:08 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

As I've already said Ohme, this is a fine piece of poetry

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Denise
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2 posted 11-13-1999 01:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Ohme this is simply splendid! So beautifully done!

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Denise

caroline
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3 posted 11-13-1999 01:51 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You've done well Ohme This is so lovely.
I love the nature theme you've used, its just beautiful!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Munda
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4 posted 11-14-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Ohme, this is too beautiful ! Up you go ! : )
RobertB
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5 posted 11-14-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

I still like it too!!!!!

Robert

very good imagery

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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