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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Fascination Touching waters Feeling wet Dipping in Ripples flow Through me Striking match Tinder dry Leaping flames Singeing heat Burns me. Emotions grow Beating heart Tingling body Kisses drip On me. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What a fascinating piece!  ------------------ Denise |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Liked this Much! esp.."kisses drip on me"...great. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my, I do so like this one....so few words, but not a one wasted. Nicely done Robert ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks Ruth...I see you are up early this morning!!! ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fire and water intermingled ... interesting. I like it. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I agree, RobertB. This says so much. ------------------ I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiles...up early Robert? I work the night shift 11Pm-7:30 Am, just haven't been to bed yet is all ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
lol..I forgot hoot....but then with a nick like hoot_owl how could I????? ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Robert this is a great piece of poetry I love the succint style, and the lines~~Kisses drip on me Brilliantly done ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Great job Rob-B.....very interesting style! |
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