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RobertB
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0 posted 11-12-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Fascination


Touching waters
Feeling wet
Dipping in
Ripples flow
Through me

Striking match
Tinder dry
Leaping flames
Singeing heat
Burns me.

Emotions grow
Beating heart
Tingling body
Kisses drip
On me.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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What a fascinating piece!

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Julie
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Liked this Much! esp.."kisses drip on me"...great.
hoot_owl_rn
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Oh my, I do so like this one....so few words, but not a one wasted. Nicely done Robert

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Alis volat propriis
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RobertB
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Thanks Ruth...I see you are up early this morning!!!

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5 posted 11-13-1999 09:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Fire and water intermingled ... interesting.
I like it.

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I agree, RobertB. This says so much.

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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!
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Smiles...up early Robert? I work the night shift 11Pm-7:30 Am, just haven't been to bed yet is all

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

RobertB
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8 posted 11-13-1999 11:03 AM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

lol..I forgot hoot....but then with a nick like hoot_owl how could I?????

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caroline
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9 posted 11-13-1999 12:01 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Robert this is a great piece of poetry I love the succint style, and the lines~~

Kisses drip
on me

Brilliantly done

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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Great job Rob-B.....very interesting style!
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