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I Want To Feel ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Want To Feel ... ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Forever in your arms, locked in your embrace. Tiny little I-love-you's written all over my face. Tiny little kisses, soft as a butterfly's wings. I want to feel what forever feels like, so I can know these things. Soft kisses given at dawn. Enough for the day, to me would belong. Walking hand in hand, knowing you were there. I want to feel what forever feels like. I want to know someone cares. A smile to last a lifetime, would be forever mine ... if I could feel what forever feels like and share your love divine. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-13-1999).] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very very nice Marge ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree with Robert, very very nice! ------------------ Denise |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Marge... So very well done. I know this feeling all to well, it is in my mind every day. Beautiful work. ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise, RobertB and Thunder ... appreciate the fact that you liked it. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kenneth Ray Taylor Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 139Duluth, Minnesota, USA |
A beautiful poem. I hope it isn't wasted on a dream someone-in-the-future, but is written to someone already present in your life. The second line of the final stanza confuses me. Does it contain a typographical error? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kenneth ... thanks for the 'proofing' ... seems I was 'goofing'. Just for your edification ... no dream is 'wasted'. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Very nice, Marge. Enjoyed this. ------------------ I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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