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I Want To Feel ...

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Marge Tindal
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I Want To Feel ...
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Forever in your arms,
locked in your embrace.
Tiny little I-love-you's
written all over my face.

Tiny little kisses,
soft as a butterfly's wings.
I want to feel what forever feels like,
so I can know these things.

Soft kisses
given at dawn.
Enough for the day,
to me would belong.

Walking hand in hand,
knowing you were there.
I want to feel what forever feels like.
I want to know someone cares.

A smile to last a lifetime,
would be forever mine ...
if I could feel what forever feels like
and share your love divine.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-13-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
RobertB
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1 posted 11-12-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

very very nice Marge

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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2 posted 11-12-1999 11:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree with Robert, very very nice!

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Denise

ThUnDeRkYsS
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3 posted 11-13-1999 04:36 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Marge... So very well done. I know this feeling all to well, it is in my mind every day. Beautiful work.

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Marge Tindal
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Denise, RobertB and Thunder ... appreciate the fact that you liked it.

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5 posted 11-13-1999 07:04 AM       View Profile for Kenneth Ray Taylor   Email Kenneth Ray Taylor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kenneth Ray Taylor

A beautiful poem. I hope it isn't wasted on a dream someone-in-the-future, but is written to someone already present in your life. The second line of the final stanza confuses me. Does it contain a typographical error?
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 11-13-1999 07:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kenneth ... thanks for the 'proofing' ... seems I was 'goofing'.
Just for your edification ... no dream is 'wasted'.



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Very nice, Marge. Enjoyed this.

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Beautiful

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

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