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Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


0 posted 11-12-1999 09:28 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Skyfyre

for traveler

You are ...
The first ray of the dawn
Not quite of gold, but silvered in the mists
Whose breath becomes the dew
On waking blooms.

You are ...
The brightness of the noon
Wherein the sun embraces all below
With gracious, loving arms
That warm the soul.

You are ...
The twilight's rainbow hues
An iridescence splashed across the sky
That captivates my gaze
With breathless awe.

You are ...
The quietude of night
A gentle peace that overlays my world
While sweetest dreams of you
Await the dawn.


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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die."



[This message has been edited by Nochtdraco (edited 11-12-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Linda Anderson - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


1 posted 11-12-1999 09:30 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Nocht, this is soooooooo beautiful- I love it!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


Denise
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2 posted 11-12-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Nocht, this is simply lovely! Well done, indeed!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 11-12-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How sweet
Skyfyre
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4 posted 11-13-1999 09:17 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Thank you Systematic and dsnyder, for the compliments . I am not one who tends toward non-rhyme, so this was a bit of a stretch for me.

And hoot -- yes, he is!

Nocht
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5 posted 11-13-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Well, let me assure you, you stretched it perfectly

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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!
H. Arlequin
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6 posted 11-19-1999 08:05 PM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

HA applauds!
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