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mojar
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0 posted 11-12-1999 03:20 PM       View Profile for mojar   Email mojar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mojar

driving down a dusty road,
enjoying all i see.
my mind as clear and fresh and clean,
as the leaves the line the trees.
traffic coming there is none,
i'm out here all alone.
peace is on the street sign,
of this road that's paved with stone.
there are no speed restrictions,
no cars or towns in sight,
nothing's there to slow me down,
as i drive into the night.
the road is straight, no curves or bends,
my headlights fill the sky.
miles and miles behind me,
on this journey of my mind.
far up in the distance,
a cloud appears to be.
swallowing up the very path,
it takes my sight from me.

me.
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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 11-12-1999 04:08 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

MoJo man

I can see all you wrote so clearly - you did a great job of showing the flip side of white line fever. Great imagery

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Martie
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2 posted 11-12-1999 04:53 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Beauful imagary and well done poem. My rode always seems to have so many curves.
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3 posted 11-12-1999 09:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, I enjoyed this!

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mojar
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4 posted 11-14-1999 04:33 PM       View Profile for mojar   Email mojar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mojar

thanks, seems like my life is a highway and i and always in a fog.
JennyLee
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5 posted 11-20-1999 06:56 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Beautiful fog tho MO

Jenny

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6 posted 05-01-2002 08:34 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Dense and hard to see through. Just kidding! I really enjoyed it.
 
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