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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
driving down a dusty road, enjoying all i see. my mind as clear and fresh and clean, as the leaves the line the trees. traffic coming there is none, i'm out here all alone. peace is on the street sign, of this road that's paved with stone. there are no speed restrictions, no cars or towns in sight, nothing's there to slow me down, as i drive into the night. the road is straight, no curves or bends, my headlights fill the sky. miles and miles behind me, on this journey of my mind. far up in the distance, a cloud appears to be. swallowing up the very path, it takes my sight from me. me. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
MoJo man I can see all you wrote so clearly - you did a great job of showing the flip side of white line fever. Great imagery [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 11-12-1999).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beauful imagary and well done poem. My rode always seems to have so many curves. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, I enjoyed this! ------------------ Denise |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thanks, seems like my life is a highway and i and always in a fog. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful fog tho MO  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Dense and hard to see through. Just kidding! I really enjoyed it. |
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