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Just An Old Fashioned Love Story

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Toerag
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0 posted 11-12-1999 03:18 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

It was a beautiful sunset,
Against a mountain view,
Beauty uncomparable,
Romantically shared by two.

It wasn't thier first encounter,
They'd loved so much before,
Each time better than the other,
Who could ask for more?

Their bodies lovingly entertwined,
Now "one" in love together,
As the sunset went down in color,
Their love consumated forever.

Their commitments sealed in romance,
Their love is never ending,
A marriage and honeymoon in Hawaii,
A new life together beginning.

It's such a touching love song,
One that should endure,
Nothing could come between them,
Good luck LongJohn and Balladeer!
© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 11-12-1999 03:24 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Somehow I knew there had to be a twist there somewhere. Good one, really enjoyed.
LngJhnAg
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2 posted 11-12-1999 03:31 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Warning to all who read this sad poem by that scalawag - he is not to be believed - he is a dirty rotten rascal and a bane to us all. Toerag is a rascal and should never be believed.
LngJhnAg
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3 posted 11-12-1999 03:32 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Warning to all who read this sad poem by that scalawag - he is not to be believed - he is a dirty rotten rascal and a bane to us all. Toerag is a rascal and should never be believed.
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 11-12-1999 03:39 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Me thinks the Long One protests too much with the double post, but then Toe can drive one to extreams.

Toe... This was looking real good... and I thought "WOW! We're going to make it through to the end."... and then! WHAM! BAM! THANK YOU MAM!... I guess I held those expectations to high.

Now if I can just wipe the image clean from my wet-ware.
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5 posted 11-12-1999 03:39 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Gee, Toe... giving away his secrets like that got Long John so upset he's hiccuping! LOL.

Such a touching, romantic story... when the thought of touching makes me cringe! LOL. Thanks for the grins, sweets...
Poet deVine
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6 posted 11-12-1999 03:41 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

If you stop reading before the last stanza this is a beautiful poem..shows a depth of feeling and excellent use of imagery. I like it....then he punch line...ok...but I really like your serious stuff too....(are your feet on that chair again?)
Toerag
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7 posted 11-12-1999 03:43 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

why ms. devine....To what do you refer?....LOL
LngJhnAg
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8 posted 11-12-1999 03:44 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

What double post?

What double post?
suthern
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9 posted 11-12-1999 03:48 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I just realized... it's Friday and the sailor has been at Hooters all day (leaving Bal and those divine red pumps all alone *G*) Maybe that explains PART of the double posting! LOL
Marilyn
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10 posted 11-12-1999 04:05 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Oh my...such a lovely love story..then the punch line and I can not get the awlful thought out of my head! *LOL*. I hope you too have a very happy life together.

Great job Toe...wasn't sure if I should have been looking for a punch line in this or not...lol.
Martie
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11 posted 11-12-1999 04:40 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I knew this love story was too perfect to be true. Where did that bone come from? The funny one I mean, were you born with it?
LngJhnAg
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12 posted 11-12-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

martie - NO! He wasn't born WITH it - he IS it - lol
Lorelei54
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13 posted 11-12-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

Suthern, you got the Hooters and friday part right, I told him at 3pm to stay at work till he got sober, because 1, he was not safe to drive and 2, I'm not in the mood to put up with him, feeling a little under the weather, I'm sure he will just sleep it off when he gets home..LOL

[This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 11-12-1999).]
Toerag
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14 posted 11-12-1999 04:45 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Lorelei...I hope you feel better soon sweetheart...LJA, I hope you puke all night!
Have a great weekend all....I'm outta here, but will swing by tomorrow morning to say howdie if any of you are around....g'nite.
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15 posted 11-12-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marilyn, YOU can't get that awful thought out of your head?

and, Martie, never ask Toe about his bone! Trust me.

Toe, this is your comeback? This? Oh, well, I guess you gotta work with what you got. liemonging bum!!! LOL
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16 posted 11-12-1999 08:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You fooled me too! I thought this was going to one of your serious ones! Well, it's still lovely (most of it) and with a funny twist!

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Denise

stuart
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17 posted 11-12-1999 08:24 PM       View Profile for stuart   Email stuart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stuart

Thanks Toe, (LOL) What a great read! LOL
Go get em guys
hoot_owl_rn
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18 posted 11-12-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Toe, I knew this was too wonderfully serious and romantic to be you....caught me at the end
suthern
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19 posted 11-13-1999 10:14 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lor: I hope you feel better soon... though with what you have to put up with (shaking head) *G*

ROFLMAO @ Deer's awful thought!!!! Hehehehehe
Ohme
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20 posted 11-13-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I knew I could count on ya Toe. See, that's another belly laugh. ROFL And today, I needed it!

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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!
Toerag
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21 posted 11-13-1999 12:16 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Thanks for all the replies you "real" artists offered.....For some reason, it's so easy to write love poetry about this couple?...The words just seem to flow into my fingers....they are a lovely couple, fine folks, and deserve each other....
Iloveit
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22 posted 11-15-1999 09:42 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

ROFG thanks for the smiles this morning
 
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