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Iloveit
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0 posted 11-12-1999 10:27 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit


sexy sleek
strong strutting
legs exclamation pointed
by red leather spike heels
accentuated with the
short swirls of a skirt
soliciting
looks of appreciation
and low soft whistles
by those too entranced
to care who hears
eliciting
raised eyebrows
knowing looks
and clucks of
disapproval
by those
not daring
enough
to cause the commotion


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Toerag
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1 posted 11-12-1999 10:33 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Very nice erotic poetry dear....and it describes Balladeer so well.....
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2 posted 11-12-1999 10:36 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL @ describing Balladeer... Great poem, Lovey!
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3 posted 11-12-1999 10:38 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

good to see you 2 (makes twice today for one of you ), thanks for the compliment but ummmm Balladeer wears red high heels???? seems I am confused lolol....hugs and I gotta run, was just in for a min today

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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 11-12-1999 12:15 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Excellent Imagery in this one...nicely written
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5 posted 11-12-1999 12:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You think you're confused? Me, too, unless both of those jokers think I am sleek and sexy. Suthern may do so but, if Toe tries anything, I'll beat him to death with my high heel!

The poem is excellent, smooth and effective. I can just picture you, er, her.
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6 posted 11-12-1999 03:45 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

And dangit Bal, she stole your pumps....you can borrow mine.

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7 posted 11-12-1999 03:49 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Lovey - this one all very very erotic bit of prose - you are truly hot -

Toe - ROFLMAO@Deer in heels - you are pure classic, and that comment says it all -
Iloveit
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8 posted 11-15-1999 09:21 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

ROFG@beat him with my high heel.....
thanks all
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9 posted 11-15-1999 10:57 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Provoking self-portrait ... Nicely done Lovey ...
Iloveit
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who said it was a self portratit *g* lol, oh yeah I forget...*you* know me
hugs and thanks

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11 posted 06-28-2012 03:54 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'm glad you linked to this... I'm smiling at the memories, HFG! *S*
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