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To Touch Mine Heart

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Chaotic Rumblings
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0 posted 11-12-1999 03:17 AM       View Profile for Chaotic Rumblings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chaotic Rumblings

fell daemon I
thrice guilted child
trod ever lone
wrought faithless deeds
lost vision's eye
thoughts errant wild
feared nothing known
vice crushes needs
spoke careless words
deluded screams
heart's dying here
love's dying yon
come piercing shards
dove's ended dreams
fire casting sears
denuded song





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1 posted 11-12-1999 03:30 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This is a truly, truly amazing piece, C.R.
I can appreciate all the work behind this little gem as well as the "searing' emotion within it.


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2 posted 11-12-1999 04:26 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This piece leaves even my jaded heart struck with a degree of awe.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
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3 posted 11-12-1999 09:03 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent!! I loved the rhythm of this one!
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