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Chaotic Rumblings
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since 1999-11-12
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Here, there, everywhere

0 posted 1999-11-12 03:17 AM


fell daemon I
thrice guilted child
trod ever lone
wrought faithless deeds
lost vision's eye
thoughts errant wild
feared nothing known
vice crushes needs
spoke careless words
deluded screams
heart's dying here
love's dying yon
come piercing shards
dove's ended dreams
fire casting sears
denuded song





[This message has been edited by Chaotic Rumblings (edited 11-12-1999).]

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Michael
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1 posted 1999-11-12 03:30 AM


This is a truly, truly amazing piece, C.R.
I can appreciate all the work behind this little gem as well as the "searing' emotion within it.


Michael

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2 posted 1999-11-12 04:26 AM


This piece leaves even my jaded heart struck with a degree of awe.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-11-12 09:03 AM


Excellent!! I loved the rhythm of this one!

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