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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 11-11-1999 11:25 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is an e-mail I sent to my sisiter who is always there for me

Dear Margaret,

Thank you for the moments, thank you for the years
Thank you for cushioning my worries and my fears

Thank you for the inspiration, thank you for the hope
And for making it so easy and so effortless to cope

Thank you for the conversations, thank you for the love
And for taking me to special places I've been dreaming of

Thank you for the escapades in you little car
Thank you just for being the sister that you are

My heart is just rejoicing, it's jumping up and down
It's dancing in the meadows and it's spinning all around

My heart is doing somersaults and flip-flops in the air
It's doing rolling cartwheels and jumping jacks with flair

My heart is doing little swirling spirals in the breeze
It's fluttering and twirling and tumbling with ease

My heart is doing wheelies, it's relishing in fun
So grateful is my little heart for all that you have done

Love,Elizabeth
© Copyright 1999 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-11-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Elizabeth! I'm sure she'll treasure it forever!

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Denise

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2 posted 11-11-1999 11:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is wonderful, Elizabeth. We all have so many friends or relatives who have meant very much to us and too seldom do we take the time to tell them. It was very special of you to do so.

Veo que usted es una persona muy buena. Bienvenidos a nuestro mundo pequeno.
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 11-12-1999 12:28 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Balladeer, Noa falo espanhol, mas falo portugues, e da para entender seus comprimentos. Tambem acho que voce vai enteder meu resposto. Obrigada (gracias)pelas palavras nao merecidas.
Elizabeth
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 11-12-1999 12:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful
Isis
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5 posted 11-12-1999 12:59 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

A lovely tribute, she couldn't help but love it!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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6 posted 11-12-1999 01:34 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Entendido, Elizabeth. My Portugues is quite rusty so I'll play it safe and stick to English. Glad you understood.
Severn
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7 posted 12-17-1999 06:05 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Missed this and found it...and found it wonderful.
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 12-17-1999 06:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elizabeth -

This is heart-rendering.
Sisters ... are wonderful.
Margaret will be delighted.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irie
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9 posted 12-17-1999 03:06 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Elizabeth,
You once posted a note to me about a poem I wrote for my parents, asking me "Can You be my daughter?"....
So now I ask you....Can you be my sister?
What a wonderful tribute to her.

Sheri AKA: Irie
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 12-17-1999 03:29 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How special, what a precious gift you have given her in thanks  
RSEvans
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11 posted 12-17-1999 03:38 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

What a nubile little heart!  Certainly is a busy one.  I'll bet she loved this poem.
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 12-17-1999 05:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Thank you all!
Marge, I'm sending you a poem soon
Sheri, Yes, I remember your lovely poem, and yes you may be my sister
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 12-17-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Liz,
Only you could write something as sweet and meaningful as this poem, I can't top this.
*L* Sy
RainbowGirl
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14 posted 12-17-1999 06:18 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

There's a lot more to you that at first meets the eye, isn't there...nope, that was a rhetorical question..I already know the answer.. Bet she loved it as much as you enjoyed writing it..

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


 
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