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Pool Of Remembrance

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Mystic Essence
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0 posted 11-11-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for Mystic Essence   Email Mystic Essence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic Essence

Violets slightly misted
With an angel's sigh
Smeared across emerald lands
Within my imagination
The jewels of my past
Sparkle in azure pools
I gaze upon a vision
Of you, my love
Dancing within the blue
My finger traces
Lingering above your face
Then plunging
Into the cool dews
Your image shimmers
Then fades silently
The crystal droplets
Once held you
Now only hold my sorrow
Bitter tears
Clinging to my memories
As I turn away
Knowing never again
Will I touch you
Only will I chase
The moistened droplets
Of your soul
And forever only know you
As a tiny wave
In my pool of remembrance




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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~ Althea Willow, 1999~
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Denise
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1 posted 11-11-1999 10:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so touching. Wonderful, heartfelt piece!

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Denise

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Mystic ... this is beautiful. The imagery wrapped in these lines is as clear as the 'pool of remembrance':

'Knowing never again
Will I touch you
Only will I chase
The moistened droplets
Of your soul'

Absolutely beautiful.



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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Isis
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3 posted 11-12-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Mystical writings, so beautiful and wonderful imagery. So glad I got to read this one. Love it!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
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4 posted 11-12-1999 01:09 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

If I could write free verse, I would wish for it to be half as good as this.
hoot_owl_rn
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Excellent verse
Mystic Essence
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Thank you all, it means a lot to me.

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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~ Althea Willow, 1999~
Alwye
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7 posted 11-13-1999 09:27 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful, my friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Dusk Treader
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8 posted 11-13-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Great work, my friend! Beautiful work, I thouroughly enjoyed it. I am honored that I got to preread this.

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"All is gone except the will to be." - Metallica - "For Whom the Bell Tolls"
 
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