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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
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Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-11-11 09:13 PM


So many things I want to say.
So many things I want to do.

So many things yet I'm so scared.

So scared because this feeling is new.
So scared because I dont know what to do.

So scared because this never happened to me before.

This poem I was afraid to post at first cause I thought people would get the wrong idea.
Just recently ive gotten a girlfriend and well I love her, and this is basically the first girlfriend Ive ever had (well worth the wait.) THIS IS NOT ABOUT SEX AS MANY MIGHT THINK IT IS!

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life is short kill quick

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-11 09:21 PM


Just be yourself, be real. If she's the one for you, she'll love you just the way you are!

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Denise


Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-11-11 09:25 PM


Tom, Denise is right.....just do and say what comes to mind, don't over analyze everything.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-11-11 09:53 PM


well you didnt get the wrong idea as I thought but its just so new to me I dont know the first think to do or even say(and I want to say manny things) I just dont know were to bedin and so many things I want to do I dont know were to begin either.

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life is short kill quick

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-11-11 11:08 PM


I like this.....new things in life are frightening. It is always hard to open up ourselves, to break down the walls and let ourselves open for hurt....but without doing so, we can not let ourselves open to love either. Just relax, be yourself and let what happens happen. She's a lucky girl
suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
5 posted 1999-11-13 09:43 PM


Hoot im the lucky one here, Im so lucky I got her. thanks for your kind words of wisdom hoot and all the rest of the gang

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life is short kill quick

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
6 posted 1999-11-21 10:13 PM


Yes Tom, you are the lucky one


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



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