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Fisherman |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Fisherman The fish like silver wishes flash behind the rock, a slither of a dance. More then this dream a fisherman’s chance to contemplate the day. Beyond the place of pool's cold this poet told of a fisherman's strong and steady hold and what she thought to spin of gold was a fiber pure and unafraid made from peace and love. So from her chair she cast with pole and filament naught a line of words with nimble fingers fast across a keyboard the letters sought to find connection in this pool vast and the fisherman's heart was caught. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
neat twist at the end....the Net can catch you can't it?? ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, I was totally blown away by the ending of this Martie.....great job and you certainly caught my attention  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What a wonderful poem and clever end! I love it! ------------------ Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm glad you liked the surprise ending. Thanks for reading |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie .. you reeled me right in with this one. Nice catch ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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