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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-11-11 01:14 PM


Heavens Vessel

Visiting in heavens meadows,
Where greenery and water flows,
We come upon some knolls of time,
The ones we often stroll and climb.

Islands of serendipity
Old ones of past humanity.
The sands and dust of former ties
The remnants of some last goodbyes.

It's here the waters flow like tears
And here the greenest greens appear.
It's here forgiveness turns to fate
And here commitments rain to late.

All things grow from common dust
And all depend on common trust.
It is what grew the Adam Tree,
And all the other greenery.

It's in our world the heavens flow
And that is all, we need to know.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 1999-11-11 01:24 PM


Beautiful Seymour !
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 1999-11-11 07:06 PM


Munda,
Thanks for the beautiful

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-11-11 07:22 PM


You are a wise man my friend...and remember, this comes from an owl so I should know. A wise lesson to be learned in this one and well stated
Denise
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4 posted 1999-11-11 08:01 PM


Simply heavenly!

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Denise


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5 posted 1999-11-11 08:13 PM


This just happens to be wonderful.

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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 1999-11-11 10:39 PM


Hoot,
Thank you so much.
Denise,
Thank you too.
Marge,
And thank you.
All my loving friends.

Sunshine
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7 posted 1999-11-12 11:28 AM


You cast spells, Dear Sir.
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 1999-11-12 11:56 PM


Sunshine,
You cast pearls. *L*

Cinderella
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9 posted 1999-11-13 04:02 PM


Absolutely devine!
caroline
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10 posted 1999-11-13 04:07 PM


Majestic this is, Seymour. I love it

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


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