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My Lorelei - Not a morning girl

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LngJhnAg
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0 posted 11-11-1999 12:25 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LngJhnAg

Lorelei lounges there,
In our marriage bed.
Sleepy eyes and rumpled hair,
Wrapped up in our bedspread.

She's not a morning greeter,
Sunrise she'd rather miss,
But still she wakes up sweeter,
When we share our wakeup kiss.

She's my angel of the morning,
She's my devil late at night.
She changes without warning,
All I need is hold her tight.

She's everything I ever wanted,
She completes me in every way.
The angel and devil I once hunted,
Is in my heart and soul to stay.

Love ya, lil Lorelei...


© Copyright 1999 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-11-1999 12:28 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I don't guess I need to tell you how lucky y'all are... your poem says you know! *S* Well done, sailor...
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LJA....oh, how sweet. I hope she enjoys it as much as I did. What a nice tribute to your better half

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LngJhnAg
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3 posted 11-11-1999 12:57 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hootessa - I prefer to think of Lorelei as my equal half - lol - but then again, since I don't get equal say, equal number of O's, equal rights to apologies,... well, you know how it is with men/women relationships... I gues she is my better half - lol - thank you for the kudos

Belle - thank you for that verey sweet tribute... I hope all is going well out your way.
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4 posted 11-11-1999 01:05 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

LJA: What a lovely image your poem conjures up, the perfect mirror for you..

HUSG

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5 posted 11-11-1999 01:28 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This is so lovely, I love it. : )
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Oh, Lng Jhn, this is so very lovely....I know this will mean the world to Lorelei.....makes me feel all warm and fuzzy....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

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7 posted 11-11-1999 02:29 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is so lovely, loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Andrew Scott
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8 posted 11-11-1999 02:36 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Well said Sir John... got a lady that's much the same. Ya gotta love them.
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9 posted 11-11-1999 02:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

An angel and a devil all wrapped up into one. What a perfect tribute to your wife, Michael. Congrats to you both.

My ex-wife was like that, too.....she just got the times mixed up!
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LOL - This is great LJA - Especially when I can visualize that huge bedroom....... um...seems like such a vivid picture.... was I there???? um...... shutting up now...
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This is so sweet!

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LngJhnAg
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12 posted 11-12-1999 02:53 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Nan

Yep - you was there - but that's our little secret, right? oops - I guess it WAS it our little secret - lol

'Deer - lol @places and time

As for you ladies - if you want a man to love you as much as I love lil Lorelei, all you hafta do is demand intimacy the way Lorelei demands it of me. She is insatiable, and I love her for the way she makes me need her every minute of my life - you may not want to be intimate every night, and he may not want that, too - but do it anyway and you will find that bonding you've always wanted and needed is only a touch away.
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13 posted 11-12-1999 03:34 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

LJA...Seriously for a moment, many of us, the guys and gals alike, only dream of what you two have together....and it's wonderful. I know, (and so do you) another lady that would be like this....she'd make a wonderful partner for sure. You have something fantastic my friend, don't ever let it go!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-12-1999).]
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Listen to LJA! Demand intimacy?.....yea right....I can hear him telling his friends now; "That's right by God, I make love to my wife every single time she wants it!"
Lorelei54
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My heart is so full of love for this sailor, he amazes me with all the sweetness he manages to write..and in truth he is just as sweet in real life. And the part about demending...well, what's wrong with persistance? I'm sure most guys are masters at it!!! It's about tiem us ladies get to demand a little too.
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16 posted 11-12-1999 04:32 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lor: He's grinning too broadly to garner much sympathy about your demands! *G*
Nan
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I'll have what they're having!!!
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Sweets, dis here bird
don't wike mawnings either.



[This message has been edited by Tweety (edited 11-14-1999).]
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19 posted 11-13-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LJA what a wonderful poem you write for her!
I hope you guys always have happiness!
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Some poems just make me smile.

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