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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-11 03:39 AM


In my life I sometimes try
to "go on" what I feel
sometimes it hurts, sometimes I cry
but to me it is quite real

I'm not quite sure if it is right
but I give all none-the-less
overcome my fears and all my fright
and shoot for what feels best

Sometimes it works, and sometimes not
at least I know I tried
I gave this try all that I've got
pushed all things far aside

But when it works it makes me see
that every last sad time
whatever for, it seems to be
is worth this single shine

In life you see, we have but one
one chance to make it work
and if we never have some fun
we'll never get that "perk"

So never stop, do what feels real
try, try, and try again
dont ever stop, unless you see
you've hit the deadest end

Untill you see what this can be
it may not seem worth while
but when you finally do succeed
you'll pass through that denial.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be


[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 11-11-1999).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-11-11 06:18 AM


Makes a nice early morning read.
Thanks.


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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-11 09:54 AM


Hey, where have you been? We've missed you around here. Nice one...sometimes we have no choice but to go on dispite all

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
3 posted 1999-11-11 02:26 PM


Marge.... Thank you, I appreciate your comment

Hoot... I've been around, posting a bit in the "proper" forumn for the mood lately LOL Thank you, though... Glad to be back

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 1999-11-11 02:33 PM


Very true. : ) Liked this a lot.
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