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Dont Ever Give Up

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 11-11-1999 03:39 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

In my life I sometimes try
to "go on" what I feel
sometimes it hurts, sometimes I cry
but to me it is quite real

I'm not quite sure if it is right
but I give all none-the-less
overcome my fears and all my fright
and shoot for what feels best

Sometimes it works, and sometimes not
at least I know I tried
I gave this try all that I've got
pushed all things far aside

But when it works it makes me see
that every last sad time
whatever for, it seems to be
is worth this single shine

In life you see, we have but one
one chance to make it work
and if we never have some fun
we'll never get that "perk"

So never stop, do what feels real
try, try, and try again
dont ever stop, unless you see
you've hit the deadest end

Untill you see what this can be
it may not seem worth while
but when you finally do succeed
you'll pass through that denial.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 11-11-1999 06:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Makes a nice early morning read.
Thanks.


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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 11-11-1999 09:54 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey, where have you been? We've missed you around here. Nice one...sometimes we have no choice but to go on dispite all

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)
ThUnDeRkYsS
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3 posted 11-11-1999 02:26 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Marge.... Thank you, I appreciate your comment

Hoot... I've been around, posting a bit in the "proper" forumn for the mood lately LOL Thank you, though... Glad to be back

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
Munda
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4 posted 11-11-1999 02:33 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Very true. : ) Liked this a lot.
 
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