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When I was young

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-10-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

When I was Young

When I was young, my dreams glimmered.
Now the flame is set to simmer.
When I was young, my blood would boil.
Now the arteries just recoil.
When I was young, there was no change.
And now this thought to me is strange.
How in hell did I live so long?
Well maybe they spelled my name wrong?
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Cute

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 11-11-1999 08:29 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denice,
Thanks for the cute.
hoot_owl_rn
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Nice one Seymore and I like the bit of a different format for you
Ruth

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Pepper
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Another smile you've given me this morning Sy.......

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Martie
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I don't think your as old as you think you are--your quick wit and the poetry in you says you're young at heart and wise.
Mike
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6 posted 11-11-1999 10:31 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Liked... well done.
sometimes I wish I could just remember my name....
Sunshine
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so you think they've spelled YOUR name wrong? Methinks its been polished and put on a shelf, for all the world to see.

You should see what they do to MY name...LOL.

Thanks as always for the smiling wit...

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Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Fred Hobbs
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Good one Seymour, hope they keep misspelling it (and mine too!)

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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-11-1999 01:10 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Ruth,
Thank you, I always look for your response. Thank you.
Pepper,
You know what they say, a laugh a day, or is it an apple?
Martie,
To you I can only say thank you.
Mike,
Maybe they won't remember yours, Thanks
Fred,
You are one of my favorites and your comment means alot, thanks.
 
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