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Miss You Again, NO NEVER !

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 11-10-1999 10:40 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

This poem was written to the opposite of another poem I wrote called "I miss You".

My tenderness,My love
Sent to me from above
You WERE my Special One
Always shining like the sun

Bringing out my emotions
I DIED within your Oceans
I DID miss you everyday
How much, I DON'T wish to say

No longer I touch your heart
And tenderness WILL part
NO more Joy you bring to my day
So please, Please just STAY away

I'll hold you in a CHILLING embrace
And I NEVER want to see your face
Your lips I DON'T wish to devour
And miss you NOT each second and hour

Miss you again, NO never!
From this day on and forever
Where you are I DON'T want to be
And from you, I set myself FREE

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 11-10-1999 11:02 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You go girl!!! Feel better for saying it or is it fictional>?????? Anyway, great job

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

DreamEvil
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2 posted 11-11-1999 12:46 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Bitter verse often tastes best. This likes me soul-sib.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

jenmarie
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3 posted 11-11-1999 01:15 AM       View Profile for jenmarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenmarie

what a powerful poem - sometimes i wish i could set myself free like that -
Dark Angel
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4 posted 11-11-1999 07:14 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Isis, Thank you!! no its not fictional and yes I do feel better Thank you.
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Soul-Brother, thanks so much.
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Jenmarie, Thank you.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-11-1999).]
Munda
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5 posted 11-11-1999 02:12 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Liked this much Dark Angel, very powerful. Glad you got that out, didn't ya. ; )
Balladeer
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6 posted 11-11-1999 02:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Gee, Angel, don't beat around the bush. Say it like it is!!! hehe Nicely done.
WhtDove
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7 posted 11-11-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

D.A. I guess it didn't go so well! Sorry to hear that! Better things lie ahead for you Angel girl!
Dark Angel
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8 posted 11-11-1999 11:26 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Munda, thanks so much and yes I was glad
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Balladeer, thank you.
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WhtDove, thanks so much Angel.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 11-11-1999 11:50 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely done Dark....you go girl!! I like the message behind this one

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)
Dark Angel
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10 posted 11-12-1999 07:07 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ruth, Thank you so much Hon.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Moonshine
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11 posted 11-13-1999 05:25 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Wow - that is a really powerful piece DA. It speaks volumes from only a few verses. Well done - this sums up your writing " de vertute en devertutem"

Huggs.......
Dark Angel
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12 posted 11-13-1999 03:45 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine, Thanks HoneyBee.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


JennyLee
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13 posted 11-20-1999 06:30 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

You said so powerfully....it rocks
Stated perfectly....I love it!

Jenny Lee



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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

 
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