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Death Becomes Me
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0 posted 11-10-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for Death Becomes Me   Email Death Becomes Me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Death Becomes Me

Here I sit alone in the darkness,
no one here but me,
not one to care,
not one to share,
just me!

As I sit here with my loneliness,
there lies a silent pain,
not one to hear,
a falling tear,
just me!


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RobertB
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1 posted 11-10-1999 09:27 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

welcome....I feel your poem

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
jenmarie
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2 posted 11-10-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for jenmarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenmarie

great poem !
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3 posted 11-10-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

A very beautiful poem about very ugly feelings. Loneliness can indeed feel devastating to any of us, as if it were an emotion that will never pass. But it does pass. It can be managed, if only one moment at a time.

If you are who I think you are, you need to remember you have friends. Friends who care. Talk with them. If I am mistaken, if you're not the one I think you are - you still have friends. And, in either case, you have a great deal of talent to share.


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Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry!



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Munda
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4 posted 11-11-1999 02:29 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

You say so much, with so few words.
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