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One summer night

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vandana
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We're together now,
Noone is around,
All alone,
One summer night,
We ran away for awhile,
Laughing we hurried,
To hide somewhere,
I was yours,
And you're mine,
We lay on the grass,
Thinking about the memories,
We had shared,
Under the stars,
Wrapped in your fingers,
You won't let me go,
Till the time come for us to go,
I lost my heart to you,
Feeling the breeze in the sky,
Softly you wispher,
I laugh as you lift me up,
Beautiful memories,
And bitter memories,
I was gently realizing,
How much you're meant to me
The time went slowly,
We said goodbye,
Left our secert place behind,
I lay in bed all night,
I was yours,
you're mine
You were my own,
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Mike
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1 posted 11-10-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice... enjoyed your poem.
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3 posted 11-20-1999 01:43 PM       View Profile for FreeByrd   Email FreeByrd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit FreeByrd's Home Page   View IP for FreeByrd

A beautiful feeling. You expressed yourself here very well.

Enjoyed reading it very much

-RS
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