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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
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Ontario, Canada

0 posted 1999-11-10 04:35 PM


Let me wrap my arms around you.
Let me dry up every tear.
Let me comfort and support you.
Let me help you fight your fear.

I wish to show my friendship.
I wish to share much of me.
I wish to sooth your hardship.
I wish to unbend your knee.

For in your words is such sorrow.
I see your daily struggle through.
Each day there is hope for the morrow.
I pray you see this as true.

I wish that I could be the arms.
To comfort every pain.
I wish my love could be the charm.
So you don't loose but gain.

© Copyright 1999 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 1999-11-10 04:39 PM


Marilyn, This is so beautiful thanks for sharing it with us.
RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
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Tulsa, OK, USA
2 posted 1999-11-10 04:40 PM


A very inticing offer...and a beautiful sentiment.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 1999-11-10 07:21 PM


What a warm soul you are. : )
Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa
4 posted 1999-11-10 07:59 PM


Very, very lovely, Marilyn you always know
what to say to make me *S* kotc!!!!!!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-11-10 09:51 PM


Marilyn,
Thank you so much my dear friend. You are a treasure.
Hugs
Ruth

Julie
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since 1999-08-20
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Houston, TX
6 posted 1999-11-10 09:53 PM


Lovely sentiments...
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
7 posted 1999-11-10 10:14 PM


\thankyou all for your comments. This is dedicated to a few close friends of mine that are going through some tough times. It is also dedicated to a lost soul here. I feel his pain and wish I could help ease it. He is a compassionate soul and having a really hard time right now.
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
8 posted 1999-11-10 10:25 PM


Very lovely sentiments Marilyn....I can see you are a great comfort to your friends......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
9 posted 1999-11-10 10:33 PM


You have a warm and loving soul my friend. I shall be there for you anytime and you for me. Thanks for sharing your sentiments. ((HUGS))

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Marilyn
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Ontario, Canada
10 posted 1999-11-11 03:59 PM


Pepper...thankyou I hope I am a comfort to my friends.

Isis....My sister. Thankyou for being all this poem says to me. You are a true soul sister...I Wuv ya...

H. Arlequin
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11 posted 1999-11-19 08:04 PM


HA applauds!!
WhtDove
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12 posted 1999-11-19 10:59 PM


Marilyn this was just superb!
Marilyn
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Ontario, Canada
13 posted 1999-11-19 11:39 PM


H. Arlequin...thankyou....

WhtDove....Your kudos are much appreciated!

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14 posted 1999-11-20 12:38 PM


Marilyn, this is a generous offer.
There are many hearts that need to know
there is someone to whom they can reach out.
Thank you for the lovely thoughts.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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