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Kevin
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0 posted 11-10-1999 04:14 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Just how long has it been?
my friend I wish that I could say
my mind has wandered off again
distant from the light of day

insecure with my surroundings
lost among familiar scenes
a place insanity lies bounding
distant from the world serene

no order to the way I feel
books are scattered on the shelf
emotions wrapped up in surreal
worthy of Dali himself

bend over to pick up the pieces
love and life fall to your knees
time once again ceases
a mind never again at ease.
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1 posted 11-10-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Oh Geez, I've had days like this...

good piece, Kev.
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Nice one Kevin
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3 posted 11-11-1999 08:33 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Ditto that......
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Very well done, Kevin!

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Denise

 
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