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Aurora's Fire
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Oshawa, Ontario, Canada


0 posted 11-10-1999 02:59 PM       View Profile for Aurora's Fire   Email Aurora's Fire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aurora's Fire

In my heart you will stay,
Forever and always.
But, when it begins to break and bleed,
You must be there to mend it.

I sit and cry,
Praying no one comes home
To witness the amount of pain you caused.

The tears course down my cheeks.
They splash into my hand,
I clutch them,
As if they could burn into my soul.
If only one tear could bring us back together.

I have lost you,
The power of love cannot help us now.
You cannot even look into my face.
Your guilt overrides all other emotions.
If only you would listen to my words,
I have long but forgiven you,
Love is all I feel.
There is only one lifetime,
Come back...
before it is over.

© Copyright 1999 Aurora's Fire - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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since 10-23-1999
Posts 1187
Tulsa, OK, USA


1 posted 11-10-1999 03:00 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Powerful! I loved it...so sad and yet so strong.

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Martie
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2 posted 11-10-1999 03:38 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lost love is so sad. You expressed it well
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 11-10-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful and sad both
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 11-10-1999 07:40 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Aurora's Fire ...
'There is only one lifetime,
Come back...
before it is over.'
Wow ! That's a poem in itself.
Stunning !



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