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My Birthday Wish
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My Birthday Wish |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thirty nine years ago I rested beneath your heart In your body,safe warm and protected My conception was a surprized But my birth was well planned At ten am,you would enter the operating room You looked forward the this for so long Told prior that you could never have another child You told me once you were in shock at the news But here I was,and you were ready I slept peacefully listening to your heartbeat A sound of comfort and reassurance Unaware of what the morning would bring New and bright the day began My first memory was of your eyes and scent If I close my eyes I can still smell you near me Hear your voice and see you But then I open my eyes and your gone I remember me in a high chair You forcing me to eat broccoli I hated it then,now I love it I remember the board of education I also well remember it's sting on my butt So many memories assualt me tonight The little things we did thogether Tha laughter,the teasing time alone with you Our arguements as I grew up,and love I remember the love You gave of yourself to everyone you knew So tonight Mom,for all you ever were Wishing with all my heart and soul That you could spend just one more night with me Fighting the anger and pain I still feel at your death Trying to understand why you left me and Daddy Why was it your time to go Why your not here when I need you most So my birthday wish this year is for you That you know how much I miss you And how very much I love you I rememeber you Mom Let me apologize now for the spelling errors.No spell check on the laptop....sorry. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Watcher ... no spell check needed on the heart. Beautiful. I'm sure your birthday wish will be met. A lovely tribute to your mother. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Watcher...very touching....and, I remember those things too.... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Watcher, Your Mother still watches over you from above and I'm sure she has a smile on her face knowing what a precious daughter she has. Happy Birthday hope it brings you much joy. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes, Watcher....this is very touching... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Watcher: I lost my mom 28 years ago today... so through the tears, I'll say Well Done!! That board of education was effective, wasn't it? *S* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tears with a hope you know she is still with you in spirit. What a wonderful birthday wish though! God Bless you Watcher! Many HUGS to you! And a wish for a Happy Birthday too! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thank-You all for reading. Suthern....*Hugs* I know what it is you feel. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful (at least what I could read through my tears)! Please see the post in Announcments!!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful Watcher ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful Watcher. It brought back some precious memories. Thanks : ) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Watcher: Believe me, this is perfect and no spelling checker in the world could make this a more fitting tribute for a mum who was and will always remain wonderful to you...The emotions that sing their way through this "your birthday wish"...brought tears to my eyes...Bless you! HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We also had the Hand of Inspired Knowledge applied to where our Mom usually thought our brains were at...it worked as well as the Board of Education. Well done, Watcher, thank you for sharing. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful sentiment here Watcher. Happy birthday! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Sister mine, you got your gift from me last night in, Dragon's Hoard. Your verse is a gift to us all. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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jenmarie Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 27 |
so beautiful and touching and sad ! A wonderful poem !! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I'm speechless. What can I say but, "Well done my friend"? ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent, Watcher. Wonderful sentiment beautifully done |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
HA Applauds! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Watcher~ I haven't seen you for so long ... you were here the first night I became a member of PiP ...~ This poem is sheer beauty from the heart~  Wishing you the happiest of holidays~ Hoping you'll drop in and leave us another poetic gem~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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