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Adam's Eve

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Marge Tindal
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Adam's Eve
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Loving you is the best love
I have ever known.
The years of knowing
that we were growing
in love all along.

It never occurred to me
to look beyond your love.
You were and are
the moon, the stars,
the Heaven's above.

I always hope we'll be
in love this much for all time.
Me giving my all for you ...
you joining hands with mine.

We are just the best of the best.
You're the Adam of this Eve.
The only difference is
you're the one who tempts me.

You tempt me with delight,
I'd eat your apples anytime.
And when you least expect it,
I'd offer you a bite of mine.

No penalties for taking
just one bite,
Adam and Eve together
what a delight.

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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-10-1999 07:42 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

This is sweet! Nicely done!

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2 posted 11-10-1999 07:50 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nicely done gal....

There was little left to imagination,
In the Garden of Eden.
Adam and Eve were nekkid,
Which was convenient for constant breedin'.

Then Eve started wearin' fig leaves,
Poor Adam was outta luck,
So he headed on down to Walmart,
And bought a case of Roundup.

This worked for awhile,
Adam could still have his way,
Then Eve invented,
The migraine headache!

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 11-10-1999 07:57 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Watcher ... nice to have you watching.

Toe ... Nekkid is good !
Not tonight, dear ... unless you've got a 'weed wacker' !

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Toerag
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4 posted 11-10-1999 07:59 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Marge....LOL...(not to be confused with Talley wacker?..).....(I can hear LongJohn now, "Honey, let me show ya my caterpiller!)

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-10-1999).]
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Lovely Marge.....

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6 posted 11-10-1999 09:28 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Great job, Marge... you sound like a happy, lucky lady. *S*

And ROFLMAO @ Toerag... *G*
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Toe, you are just too much sometimes....LOL
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LOL at weed whacker!! Nice going, Marge. Toe, you are one bad apple!
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9 posted 12-01-1999 10:38 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This was a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing a glimse of your wonderful love with us.
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