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Ashes In The Wind

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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 11-10-1999 06:50 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

The fire of desire
burning bright,
casts a glow
throughout the night.

The dying embers
glowing within,
jumping to life
when touched by the wind.

Our love is stirred
to a new height,
by the breath of the wind
blowing softly this night.

The morning comes,
the fire is at it's end.
Nothing left but the ashes ...
blowing in the wind.

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Watcher666
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1 posted 11-10-1999 06:56 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much!

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Jackie
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I liked it ..very nicely done..
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Very well stated in very few words. Nicely done
Mike
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Nice.
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