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Dominance (A Change of Pace) :-)

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John Yaws
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0 posted 11-09-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for John Yaws   Email John Yaws   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit John Yaws's Home Page   View IP for John Yaws

I believe this post created enough conflict, therefore....voila!

[This message has been edited by Gunslinger (edited 12-02-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 11-09-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

wow, this is really good. It would be my guess that you find the good and the bad in every relationship, no?

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Denise
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2 posted 11-09-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good! And yes, I try to!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 11-09-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow, very nicely done and the answer is definately yes
Watcher666
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4 posted 11-10-1999 03:39 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Excellent.And Yes I do!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 12-01-1999 10:05 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Enjoyed the read. I try to stay in balance, but sometimes the scale tilts but not to far.
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 12-01-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I loved this poem
Very well written
But girls, don't you think he needs a set of "The Rules"?
And I believe in equality,too, but the fact is my husband changed one diaper in his life, and I changed 40,000 ( calculated this one day)while working full time and taking classes. But come time to change a lightbulb, if I don't do it myself, it's a "PROJECT". I liked the poem a lot, gunslinger, but the equality part, I don't think so
Nan
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7 posted 12-01-1999 10:59 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Some do, GS - Some do -
It definitely works both ways...
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 12-02-1999 12:00 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

God took Adam's rib
and fashioned little ol' me.
She made me 5'2"
from my head down to my toes.
She said anyplace that Adam went ..
I could surely go.

I have no vain illusions
that men rate the #1 slot.
I'll give it consideration,
but ... I have a hunch
the answer will be ... NOT !

It's serving you well and often,
and expecting that you
carry your fair share -
exactly like I do.

Just so you don't
get the wrong idea,
I like the man who knows
how to fall to his knees and admit,
he just might appreciate me,
a tiny little bit.

Trust me, love,
I know my place.
It's standing by your side,
not 'in-your-face' !

Now I'll throw
the ball back to you ...
I know MY place and duties.
Are you sure that you do?

Smile
And remember- you said
God didn't make me
a bonehead !
And, you're right ... She didn't !
~Marge~




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Cuddlez
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9 posted 12-02-1999 12:54 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Hey GS. I want to see this poem. Will you put it back up or email it to me? Cuddlez@collegeclub.com
Thanks

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Lost Dreamer
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10 posted 12-02-1999 12:15 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I feel I owe an apology here, I brought this poem that was here up from the lower pages because I felt it was very well written with an interesting message and now it's been removed by it's author. I guess maybe I should have left a sleeping dog sleep where he was comfortable. So sorry if I caused a mix up, not intended at all.
armanca
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11 posted 12-02-1999 01:11 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for armanca

Sorry I missed it also...
 
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