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Martie
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Backyard Thanks

Have I told you
how I like the dew
in grass that hides my ankles
tickling my toes in flip flops,
Ludio’s yellow outstretched wings
pretending eagle in a birdy wired condo,
Needful, that black kink-tailed,
rubbing, meow, scratch cat
and especially reaching up
to that perfect round green
with just a hint of the sunrise apple
and the crisp juicy sweet tart bite?

Well I do.
© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell-Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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hey I want a bite too *g* you make it sound delicious
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Very lovely Martie. Wish I had a backyard. : )
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I also enjoy my backyard sooooooo much! This is great!

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Oh, nice visuals with that one

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Great poem, Martie.
I do too. (like it that is)

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Dew tell, Martie. Another excellent endeavor.
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Nicely done!

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Thankyou for the read and comments. You can come visit my backyard any time. I am very lucky to have one I can walk into and close the gate--a perfect place to meditate.
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You definately have a way of bringing out a vision of peace found so simply within the confines of a back yard. Bravo.

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