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Alicat
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0 posted 11-09-1999 04:03 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

The caramel sun broke like an egg
Over the skillet's horizon
Spilling golden-white upon the
Sleeping grains
God in the kitchen
Humming a tuneless ditty
Stooping to scratch a kitten
Behind its tawny ears
I only have one request
Lord
Make mine over-hard

Alicat the persnikitty
© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 11-09-1999 04:12 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Great one Alicat!
Nicole
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2 posted 11-09-1999 05:49 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Such a peaceful feeling this gives me, sug. The emotions this brings forward takes me back to my childhood...thank you for the trip.
hoot_owl_rn
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Excellent imagery, nicely written
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4 posted 11-09-1999 11:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds great!

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Sally S.
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5 posted 11-10-1999 12:04 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

It took me a few moments to understand the ending. Then I felt silly because I didn't get it right off. You know, you're poems always make me think! Nice work, Ali!!!
Watcher666
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6 posted 11-10-1999 04:08 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Cute!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Munda
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7 posted 11-10-1999 11:32 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Made me smile. : ) Thanks.
Iloveit
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oh I love this, will think of you and your poem my next sunrise
Nan
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9 posted 11-11-1999 07:18 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very well done, Persnickitty...
Munda
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10 posted 03-05-2000 08:38 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

nummertje 8   I'm having fun !
 
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