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Not Made of Plastic anymore..

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The Jackal
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0 posted 11-09-1999 02:36 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i went around the bend too quick
smack dab in my face
another destiny..another drink
in my own sort of peace
raising hell was never meant to be
a human being falling to its knees
still still my beating heart
another soul..
another month to break this apart
another present for the pigs..
one more moment
one more time
another chance to prove im real..
that all is right
and everythings fine..



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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 11-09-1999 02:45 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Very sad... but I like it!
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 11-09-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

very sad, but we all deserve that second chance
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


3 posted 11-09-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

This was very nice. I like it

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


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4 posted 11-09-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

hey, good job!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Emmy
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5 posted 11-09-1999 09:01 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

I like this a lot; very well done!
Watcher666
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6 posted 11-10-1999 03:36 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely Done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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