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Open Poetry #4

Not Made of Plastic anymore..

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-11-09 02:36 PM

i went around the bend too quick
smack dab in my face
another destiny..another drink
in my own sort of peace
raising hell was never meant to be
a human being falling to its knees
still still my beating heart
another soul..
another month to break this apart
another present for the pigs..
one more moment
one more time
another chance to prove im real..
that all is right
and everythings fine..

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 1999-11-09 02:45 PM

Very sad... but I like it!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-11-09 06:59 PM

very sad, but we all deserve that second chance

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-11-09 08:30 PM

This was very nice. I like it

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

4 posted 1999-11-09 08:59 PM

hey, good job!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Emmy
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

5 posted 1999-11-09 09:01 PM

I like this a lot; very well done!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

6 posted 1999-11-10 03:36 AM

Nicely Done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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