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RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
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Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-11-09 12:48 PM


The whispered soft of silky skin,
A brush, you glance then smile again,
I drink your scent, it's perfumed essence
As I draw you to my presence.
You touch my lips with feathered kiss
A soft and brushing dewlike mist
That moves me, fills me with such lust
A simple kiss that means so much.
Your soft lips part as they brush my neck,
Your breath warm against the soft flesh.
I feel your touch dance on my skin
As I yield to you once again.
At last together we have this chance
To once again join in the dance.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

[This message has been edited by RSEvans (edited 11-09-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
1 posted 1999-11-09 12:52 PM


I love the way you write, what you don't say says almost more than what you do....sigh...you make me wish for someone like that
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-09 12:56 PM


Absolutely breathtaking
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-11-09 01:09 PM


RSEvans,
Always enjoy your work.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-11-09 01:24 PM


Softly sensual.....appreciated this piece...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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California
5 posted 1999-11-09 04:17 PM


Beautiful and sensual.
Aurora's Fire
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 28
Oshawa, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 1999-11-09 06:03 PM


Very sentimental.
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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7 posted 1999-11-09 11:45 PM


Beautiful!

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Denise


Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
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Ohio
8 posted 1999-11-09 11:51 PM


mmmmmmmasterpiece! mmmmmmmuch liked!
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

9 posted 1999-11-10 03:57 AM


Liked this much!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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California
10 posted 1999-11-10 04:00 AM


Very beautiful, Robert.


Michael

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