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What She Said

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Lolita
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0 posted 11-09-1999 11:58 AM       View Profile for Lolita   Email Lolita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lolita

What she said disturbed
the word she used
to fuse the thoughts
she heard

What she wore concealed
the sin she thought
she saw but
let it in

What she cried for was
release her eyes
sealed souls in
gracious sleep

Where she ran no one
could tell but where she stayed
she stayed in
hell
© Copyright 1999 Lolita - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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1 posted 11-09-1999 12:16 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Welcome to Passions...an entry with a flourish.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
hoot_owl_rn
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Interesting, welcome to passions

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 11-09-1999 12:55 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lolita,
Enjoyed the read,
Welcome.
Iloveit
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4 posted 11-09-1999 01:26 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

wow, like this a lot, talks to me, it does, great job
Lynn
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5 posted 11-09-1999 05:40 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


I...liked...this.....and... WELCOME...to...Passions...


[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 11-09-1999).]
Aurora's Fire
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6 posted 11-09-1999 05:46 PM       View Profile for Aurora's Fire   Email Aurora's Fire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aurora's Fire

I liked.
Watcher666
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7 posted 11-10-1999 03:33 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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