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As Lonely As I'm

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vandana
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0 posted 11-09-1999 11:17 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

I don't 've a mother,
I don't 've a family,
I don't 've a place to live,
I've a friend who cares,
Sometime It 's hard to feel
How one can live like this,
I'm walking alone,
Noone with me,
To shake hands,
Or to hold me tight,
I don't have mother to love me

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-09-1999).]
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RSEvans
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1 posted 11-09-1999 01:04 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Disturbing image. Well written.

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Iloveit
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2 posted 11-09-1999 01:09 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

agree with RS, sad but beautifully written
Isis
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3 posted 11-09-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So sad..

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4 posted 11-10-1999 03:34 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed the read.

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5 posted 11-20-1999 01:36 PM       View Profile for FreeByrd   Email FreeByrd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit FreeByrd's Home Page   View IP for FreeByrd

V

You have many friends here who care. Keep walking with us and we will all hold hands.

Very nice piece

-RS
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