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A Simple Kindness

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broker6
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0 posted 11-09-1999 09:55 AM       View Profile for broker6   Email broker6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for broker6

A Simple Kindness
by ©Richard J. Budig

It was a simple kindness,
Done me by her,
"Because," she said, "I love you."
I don't remember what it was,
. . . straightened my tie
. . . maybe it was my hair.
She's always looking after me.
Seems I always need attention.
But it's killing me
Because I love another.
So a simple kindness,
Done me by her,
Makes me see the other.
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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 11-09-1999 10:02 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

broker6,
Nicely done.
hoot_owl_rn
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Welcome to passions

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)
Lolita
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You make love sound so bad! It can't be all bad, can it?
Iloveit
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like this, really well put
Martie
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You did this so well--lovely but sad too.
Denise
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Yes sad but nice!

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Watcher666
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Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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