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broker6
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since 1999-11-07
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Bellevue, NE, Sarpy

0 posted 1999-11-09 09:51 AM


Somber Amber
by ©Richard Budig 1999


Comes the new season
When trees play fall jazz
Skipping bright notes
Before the rattling breeze
Brassy yellows ride high
While red and cinnamon
Add rumble and rhythm
But it’s the note of amber
The color of solemn gold
That brings to my heart
Dark memories best left
To coming winter snows


© Copyright 1999 broker6 - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 1999-11-09 10:04 AM


broker6,
Like it.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-09 11:59 AM


Beautifully descripitive. Nice posting

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Lolita
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 44
Buffalo, NY, America
3 posted 1999-11-09 12:03 PM


I like the imagery.
Aurora's Fire
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since 1999-11-07
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Oshawa, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 1999-11-09 05:44 PM


I am guessing that you enjoy music *S* very nice!

Michael
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since 1999-08-13
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California
5 posted 1999-11-09 11:54 PM


A very enjoyable read, broker6, the association of color and music is wonderful.


Michael

Denise
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6 posted 1999-11-09 11:56 PM


Ditto!

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Denise


Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
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Ohio
7 posted 1999-11-09 11:58 PM


With fall almost over and winter approaching, it was nice to get another look before it's gone. Nice work!
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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8 posted 1999-11-10 04:02 AM


Well done!

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Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
9 posted 1999-11-10 11:19 AM


Liked this much ! : )
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