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Trail of Kisses
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Trail of Kisses |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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your lips leave a trail of moist kisses down the length of my neck as they wander from mine to taste the salt of my skin exploring the tang of sea air mingled with perfume and the flavour of me your tongue lingering in sensitive spots the butterfly softness of your kisses heighten the feelings of awareness awakening my senses to this lover's dance to this recital of emotions as we move to the symphony of love known only to our two hearts we explore the recesses of mind and heart hearing the music, as old as time itself the strains of real love's cantata ------------------ "We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers) |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
mmmmmm I liked this, yep butterfly kisses *g* know just what you mean  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
X Angel, Since you didn't say to whom you were writing I am flattered but I think a little old for this stuff. Beautiful poem. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very sensual....love this I do!! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, have definately been here and done that and enjoyed every moment of it |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nuts. I was looking for an opportunity to return the insults you so blatantly heaped on me....and then you go and write something so beautiful all I can say is....bravo. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey, my friend - you're still up to your old tricks, I see...  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Angel: Kisses like that are dangerously erotic...hmmmm, why the heck am I telling you that, you got them..*g* HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Very descriptive, tastefully erotic, well balanced. I liked it very much. ~GS~ ------------------ Live large, people! ~GS~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So beautiful and magical. Thanks ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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MacBeth Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 14 |
sounds like fun! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very nice, indeed! ------------------ Denise |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Lovely.....I liked it a lot... |
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Justin Appropriate New Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 6Just South of No Where |
Wow, Angel, this one is simply breathtaking. Michael |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this one much!!!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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