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Iloveit
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0 posted 11-09-1999 09:39 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

I want to be your companion
and walk hand in hand,
your strength enveloping mine.
Autumn leaves falling,
scuffing feet and laughter,
sharing nights, not finished by the dark.

I want to be your confidant
as you pen your deepest
thoughts, as your heartaches
bleed and finally break free.
Your dreams, I keep as if my own.
I want to smile as you smile
and giggle with you
at nothing at all.

I want to be your lover
and find the passions
that move you to action.
I want to be the softness
that induces you to trust.
I want to be the naughty
that makes you come back for more.
I want to please you.

I want to share your breakfast
and your dinner,
I want you in the shower
and in your bed and
with soft steps to bring you coffee
(I take mine black)
Your strong arms, the legs
that power your thrust,
your lips of pleasure,
these are the fuel of my desire

no it is no secret, my love,
and to put it very simply,
I want you.


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1999 Iloveit


[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-09-1999).]
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X Angel
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1 posted 11-09-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

simple indeed!
nice poem, it shows what a huge part someone else plays in our hearts eh?
X

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2 posted 11-09-1999 10:05 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

To put it simply.... absolutely excellent!!! *G* But I really must ask... Have you been reading my diary? You wrote my thoughts... more coherently than I could ever think them!
Iloveit
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3 posted 11-09-1999 10:11 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

x angel, yep, you said it perfect

suthern *g* *hands suthern back her diary*

lolol big hugs and thanks, I think coherant is a compliment isn't it?
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4 posted 11-09-1999 11:00 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Lovely, lovely, lovely......

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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 11-09-1999 11:53 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh, I do believe suthern is mistaken, think it was my diary you were reading, or my mind if nothing else. What a beautiful expression of words
Iloveit
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6 posted 11-09-1999 12:02 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

3 lovely's from pepper, that makes me smile thanks

and reading hoot's mind....whew, that's a compliment ....good to see you back
RSEvans
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7 posted 11-09-1999 12:15 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Oh to be desired in that way...

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Iloveit
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8 posted 11-09-1999 01:30 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

hmmmmm wow, RS you really made me think, I know I have read poems and thought the same thing, I wish someone would desire me like that, but never thought of it that the object of *my* desire was favored by it lol...thanks
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-09-1999 01:45 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Iloveit,
This one is a keeper in more then one way.
It made me laugh it made me cry it made me wish even a little impish.
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10 posted 11-09-1999 02:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This poem was written to the luckiest man alive, whoever he is. Exquisite words,KD. If only more people felt that way and were confident enough to say them out loud. (sigh)
Iloveit
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11 posted 11-09-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

seymore, glad to help you feel impish lol, no really glad you enjoyed

balladeer, this was written to an I wish man, in other words to the man I wish I had, but is not possible, so will follow your sigh with mine ...sigh
Aurora's Fire
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12 posted 11-09-1999 05:54 PM       View Profile for Aurora's Fire   Email Aurora's Fire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aurora's Fire

Very straightforward and loving, that'll get the man. I enjoyed very much.
Munda
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13 posted 11-09-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Iloveit, I loved it. : )
Iloveit
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14 posted 11-09-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

Aurora's Fire, I wish, unfortunately he will not ever read it.....sigh

Munda, thanks
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15 posted 11-09-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ilove it ... and I truly do ! This is lovely. Hope the 'I Wish' man comes to life.

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16 posted 11-09-1999 09:04 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

You put it simply and yet beautifully... I truly felt every word!

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17 posted 11-09-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for jenmarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenmarie

i hope you find him and get all that you want
Denise
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18 posted 11-09-1999 10:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is sooooooo beautiful! I enjoyed it very much!

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19 posted 11-10-1999 03:35 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much!

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JTF
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20 posted 11-10-1999 03:57 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Beautiful Lovey ... I hope you'll find your Irish man ...

yep, coherent is a compliment !
Iloveit
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21 posted 11-10-1999 11:24 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks all, really glad you enjoyed...

and jtf....thank you and thanks for using your dictionary *g* to look up coherent
RainbowGirl
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22 posted 11-10-1999 12:07 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: How did I miss this????...It's beautiful, like you!..

and ROFL @ Irish ...*g*

HUSG

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Iloveit
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23 posted 11-10-1999 12:09 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks rainbow and I know me too ROFG@Irish man, I got about as much chance finding an Irish one as an I wish one lolol
LngJhnAg
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24 posted 11-10-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Actually, Lovey - I did read the poem... I am part Irish - but, alas, I am already taken. This was an excellent poem.
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