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A Caring Soul

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 11-09-1999 09:25 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

A Caring Soul

Carefully disrobing
a tender heart
gently bearing it
for mankind to see.

A caring soul
sheltered within
a doubting mind
dressed in sincerity.
© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 11-09-1999 09:40 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

OOP'S I snould have knocked before I barged in. Nice one DG.
Iloveit
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2 posted 11-09-1999 09:53 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

liked this one a lot, says so much....sigh... sometimes it seems like the caring souls are a dying bunch
Pepper
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Charming Lost Dreamer.....enjoyed this much.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

hoot_owl_rn
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Very nicely told. So few words, so much said. Well done !!

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)
Balladeer
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5 posted 11-09-1999 02:59 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

So few words to say so much...the talent of a good poet like you, dreamer.
Aurora's Fire
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6 posted 11-09-1999 05:53 PM       View Profile for Aurora's Fire   Email Aurora's Fire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aurora's Fire

I really enjoyed this, very smooth.
Munda
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7 posted 11-09-1999 06:40 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

You say it so well, with so few words. Wonderful.
Isis
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8 posted 11-09-1999 06:47 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So much with so few words. Me thinks but hate to admit that the caring souls in this world usually get squashed. It is the lucky few, who find someone worthy of them. I'm not stuck up, it's the way I feel about it.

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Michael
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9 posted 11-10-1999 12:02 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, L.D.
Very revealing lines here. Good poem.

Michael
Sally S.
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10 posted 11-10-1999 12:07 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Echoing words from above..great message in so few words. Nice!!!
Watcher666
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Tis lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Lost Dreamer
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12 posted 11-10-1999 08:18 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

My apprecitive thanks go out to all of you for reading and enjoying this post. I wrote this about a Passions poet here that is well known and a splendid writer. After reading his poem Dear Diary and the comments that followed this poem came to me. Thanks again.
Michael
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Your words do me a great honor, L.D.
I thank you with all my heart.

Michael
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