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A Caring Soul
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A Caring Soul |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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A Caring Soul Carefully disrobing a tender heart gently bearing it for mankind to see. A caring soul sheltered within a doubting mind dressed in sincerity. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
OOP'S I snould have knocked before I barged in. Nice one DG. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
liked this one a lot, says so much....sigh... sometimes it seems like the caring souls are a dying bunch |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Charming Lost Dreamer.....enjoyed this much..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely told. So few words, so much said. Well done !! ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So few words to say so much...the talent of a good poet like you, dreamer. |
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Aurora's Fire Junior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 28Oshawa, Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed this, very smooth. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You say it so well, with so few words. Wonderful. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So much with so few words. Me thinks but hate to admit that the caring souls in this world usually get squashed. It is the lucky few, who find someone worthy of them. I'm not stuck up, it's the way I feel about it.  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, L.D. Very revealing lines here. Good poem. Michael |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Echoing words from above..great message in so few words. Nice!!! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Tis lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
My apprecitive thanks go out to all of you for reading and enjoying this post. I wrote this about a Passions poet here that is well known and a splendid writer. After reading his poem Dear Diary and the comments that followed this poem came to me. Thanks again. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your words do me a great honor, L.D. I thank you with all my heart. Michael |
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