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Toerag
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0 posted 11-09-1999 06:18 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

Am I to be the first?
Will I be the last?
To post right here on number four,
I better type this fast!

Guess there's just too many postings,
On good old number three,
Either that, or the responses,
That Balladeer receives.

Either way I'm sure we'll see,
That good old number four
Will out-do number three!
© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 11-09-1999 06:32 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Hmmmm....I could abuse my moderatorship and accidently delete this post...oh, sorry, I was just thinking out loud...hehe. Yes, Toe, you the man!


Michael
Toerag
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2 posted 11-09-1999 06:43 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yea Michael.....You wouldn't do that to good old Toe now would ya?....Balladeer would I'm sure...and then post one that was nasty about me!!!
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3 posted 11-09-1999 06:57 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Toerag's the man! *G* Always... whether first or not! *G*

Michael, thanks for your restraint... *G*

Toe, thanks for the welcome, sweets... here I was blaming the Looney Tunes and 'Stute residents for filling up #3... but I'd forgotten the responses 'Deer's poems generates... maybe we should put him on a response budget... every damn poem is excellent, superb, etc... we could have one canned response for each of his poems that we all sign? *G*
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4 posted 11-09-1999 06:59 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Well now, First (ooops) things First (ooops again..LOL)

Good Morning Darling..

Now then: Are you the First?..ok, you asked..

Nope would take far too long to list all the things you're First Class at..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
Nan
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5 posted 11-09-1999 07:40 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

What are you people all doing here so early in the morning? Don't any of you ever work?????? It's only fitting that we should step in Toe first - was that on TipToe???
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6 posted 11-09-1999 07:47 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Toe, this is a very important position. When people open our new site, you are the one to give them a first impression of our talent. Oh, these stomach cramps!!! One could say (and I will) that you are the ambassador of our group. Lead us onward, oh rag!
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7 posted 11-09-1999 07:59 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Nan: Did you use that dreaded 4 letter word??? Shame on you and so early in the morning for YOU guys as well...It's lunchtime here for this tiny little rock..


HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
Poet deVine
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8 posted 11-09-1999 08:49 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Toe, in my life, you can't be first, but you could be next!!!!
X Angel
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9 posted 11-09-1999 09:15 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Toe was outdid by a blonde.....she beat him in as numero uno Hmm well actually Numero Uno is one of the Menage a Trois....but as far as my information goes Blondie ain't one of the Terrifying trio. I love that you can write on the spot like that Toe and ya beat that old stooge 'Deer by 6 3/4 miles!
*wink* @ Toe
;oř~~~@ 'Deer
Luv X

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Toerag
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10 posted 11-09-1999 09:16 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Angel....I've been "did" by some blondes? But never "outdid" dear....LOL
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11 posted 11-09-1999 09:25 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Did someone mention blondes? *G* (Not that I'm on that list of Toe's... darn it! *G*)
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12 posted 11-09-1999 09:43 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

ok, have no idea what angel said, but I want to be on this list too, so sending hugs
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13 posted 11-09-1999 10:09 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lovey: But you aren't blonde! LOL. And I know it's worth a dye job to be one of the blondes who "did" Toe... But you have your legs (and your hair *EG*)... you don't need any more advantages... 'specially not when I've been waiting so long! LOL

I think Angel thought Blondie's poem was the first on this board because it happened to be at the bottom when she looked... but of course, comments keep stuff at the top. *G*

Now... git... before I start swinging this baseball bat! LOL
Toerag
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14 posted 11-09-1999 10:11 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

hehehehe....sounds like Babe "Ruth" to me...
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 11-09-1999 10:11 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Toe,
If your reading this then I guess your up off the floor. I know it took me a while to stop laughing so I could write this.
I might add you were the first but not the last.
Toerag
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16 posted 11-09-1999 10:13 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Seymore....but the 'first' is always the most memorable...LOL...besides, it's not just the blondes yanno...almost all ladies have been on "the Rag" at one time or another...LOL
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17 posted 11-09-1999 10:17 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Toerag: :-)~~~~~ You're half right (not to be confused with 'Deer's theory that you're half wit! LOL) I'm no babe... but I am a Ruth? LOL. And blonde... 2 out of 3 ain't bad? *G*
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18 posted 11-09-1999 10:22 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

and lovey runs her fingers through her hair...*lolol* and goes to work just as confused as she was before, I thought she was a babe....and a Ruth, and blonde and possibly all three the way she uses that bat *g*
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19 posted 11-09-1999 10:36 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

lolol....Toe, first or not, you always bring with you a smile!

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hoot_owl_rn
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20 posted 11-09-1999 11:58 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Always a day late and a dollar short am I....oh well, I'll shoot for number 5
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21 posted 11-09-1999 12:07 PM       View Profile for Lolita   Email Lolita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lolita

I don't understand what anybody is talking about here? What am I missing?
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22 posted 11-09-1999 01:38 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

X Angel...I don't understand. We've always been so close! Old stooge? Tongue out at me...me!..just because I wouldn't fly out there and kill your spiders? I am deeply grieved. It's gonna take a long time to get over this. OK...I'm over it. Pbbbbbrrrrrtttt!!

Iloveit....Never settle for Ragtime when you can have Classical!
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23 posted 11-09-1999 03:32 PM       View Profile for Menage #1   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Menage #1

Hey Toe!! Did I tell you about those other aliases of mine?? HeHe!! Ya never know where you're gonna find me next..... I'll tell you this, I'm no Minnie Mouse... and neither are #2 or #3.... (Maxi-mice for sure)

I think that Numero Deux is currently on extended leave, but I know for certain that I can find Menage #Trois.... yep... for sure..


[This message has been edited by Menage #1 (edited 11-09-1999).]
Toerag
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24 posted 11-09-1999 03:44 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

thanks Nan.....luvya...mean it!!!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-09-1999).]
 
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