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Toerag
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0 posted 1999-11-09 06:18 AM


Am I to be the first?
Will I be the last?
To post right here on number four,
I better type this fast!

Guess there's just too many postings,
On good old number three,
Either that, or the responses,
That Balladeer receives.

Either way I'm sure we'll see,
That good old number four
Will out-do number three!

© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 1999-11-09 06:32 AM


Hmmmm....I could abuse my moderatorship and accidently delete this post...oh, sorry, I was just thinking out loud...hehe. Yes, Toe, you the man!


Michael

Toerag
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2 posted 1999-11-09 06:43 AM


Yea Michael.....You wouldn't do that to good old Toe now would ya?....Balladeer would I'm sure...and then post one that was nasty about me!!!
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3 posted 1999-11-09 06:57 AM


Toerag's the man! *G* Always... whether first or not! *G*

Michael, thanks for your restraint... *G*

Toe, thanks for the welcome, sweets... here I was blaming the Looney Tunes and 'Stute residents for filling up #3... but I'd forgotten the responses 'Deer's poems generates... maybe we should put him on a response budget... every damn poem is excellent, superb, etc... we could have one canned response for each of his poems that we all sign? *G*

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4 posted 1999-11-09 06:59 AM


Well now, First (ooops) things First (ooops again..LOL)

Good Morning Darling..

Now then: Are you the First?..ok, you asked..

Nope would take far too long to list all the things you're First Class at..

HUSG

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Nan
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5 posted 1999-11-09 07:40 AM


What are you people all doing here so early in the morning? Don't any of you ever work?????? It's only fitting that we should step in Toe first - was that on TipToe???
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6 posted 1999-11-09 07:47 AM


Toe, this is a very important position. When people open our new site, you are the one to give them a first impression of our talent. Oh, these stomach cramps!!! One could say (and I will) that you are the ambassador of our group. Lead us onward, oh rag!
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-11-09 07:59 AM


Nan: Did you use that dreaded 4 letter word??? Shame on you and so early in the morning for YOU guys as well...It's lunchtime here for this tiny little rock..


HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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8 posted 1999-11-09 08:49 AM


Toe, in my life, you can't be first, but you could be next!!!!
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9 posted 1999-11-09 09:15 AM


Toe was outdid by a blonde.....she beat him in as numero uno Hmm well actually Numero Uno is one of the Menage a Trois....but as far as my information goes Blondie ain't one of the Terrifying trio. I love that you can write on the spot like that Toe and ya beat that old stooge 'Deer by 6 3/4 miles!
*wink* @ Toe
;oÞ~~~@ 'Deer
Luv X

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Toerag
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10 posted 1999-11-09 09:16 AM


Angel....I've been "did" by some blondes? But never "outdid" dear....LOL
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11 posted 1999-11-09 09:25 AM


Did someone mention blondes? *G* (Not that I'm on that list of Toe's... darn it! *G*)
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12 posted 1999-11-09 09:43 AM


ok, have no idea what angel said, but I want to be on this list too, so sending hugs
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13 posted 1999-11-09 10:09 AM


Lovey: But you aren't blonde! LOL. And I know it's worth a dye job to be one of the blondes who "did" Toe... But you have your legs (and your hair *EG*)... you don't need any more advantages... 'specially not when I've been waiting so long! LOL

I think Angel thought Blondie's poem was the first on this board because it happened to be at the bottom when she looked... but of course, comments keep stuff at the top. *G*

Now... git... before I start swinging this baseball bat! LOL

Toerag
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14 posted 1999-11-09 10:11 AM


hehehehe....sounds like Babe "Ruth" to me...
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15 posted 1999-11-09 10:11 AM


Toe,
If your reading this then I guess your up off the floor. I know it took me a while to stop laughing so I could write this.
I might add you were the first but not the last.

Toerag
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16 posted 1999-11-09 10:13 AM


Seymore....but the 'first' is always the most memorable...LOL...besides, it's not just the blondes yanno...almost all ladies have been on "the Rag" at one time or another...LOL
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17 posted 1999-11-09 10:17 AM


Toerag: :-)~~~~~ You're half right (not to be confused with 'Deer's theory that you're half wit! LOL) I'm no babe... but I am a Ruth? LOL. And blonde... 2 out of 3 ain't bad? *G*
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18 posted 1999-11-09 10:22 AM


and lovey runs her fingers through her hair...*lolol* and goes to work just as confused as she was before, I thought she was a babe....and a Ruth, and blonde and possibly all three the way she uses that bat *g*
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19 posted 1999-11-09 10:36 AM


lolol....Toe, first or not, you always bring with you a smile!

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20 posted 1999-11-09 11:58 AM


Always a day late and a dollar short am I....oh well, I'll shoot for number 5
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21 posted 1999-11-09 12:07 PM


I don't understand what anybody is talking about here? What am I missing?
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22 posted 1999-11-09 01:38 PM


X Angel...I don't understand. We've always been so close! Old stooge? Tongue out at me...me!..just because I wouldn't fly out there and kill your spiders? I am deeply grieved. It's gonna take a long time to get over this. OK...I'm over it. Pbbbbbrrrrrtttt!!

Iloveit....Never settle for Ragtime when you can have Classical!

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23 posted 1999-11-09 03:32 PM


Hey Toe!! Did I tell you about those other aliases of mine?? HeHe!! Ya never know where you're gonna find me next..... I'll tell you this, I'm no Minnie Mouse... and neither are #2 or #3.... (Maxi-mice for sure)

I think that Numero Deux is currently on extended leave, but I know for certain that I can find Menage #Trois.... yep... for sure..


[This message has been edited by Menage #1 (edited 11-09-1999).]

Toerag
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24 posted 1999-11-09 03:44 PM


thanks Nan.....luvya...mean it!!!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-09-1999).]

Marilyn
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25 posted 1999-11-09 05:55 PM


See what happens around here when I am gone for one evening. Ahhhh...late, late, late. I am late...but I am blonde...does that count? LOL. ahh that explains it...I am late because I am blonde...that's it. Congrats for being first Sir Rag. Although......does that mean you have no life? ...opps did I say that out loud? LOL
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26 posted 1999-11-09 06:10 PM


marilyn shhhhhhhhh don't say that too loudly, I think you included most of us here *big grins*
but if reading poems at passions means I have no life, I will gladly agree

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27 posted 1999-11-09 09:47 PM


Way to go, Toe! Congrats!

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28 posted 1999-11-10 03:37 AM


First in many things.Loved this one!

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JTF
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29 posted 1999-11-10 03:50 AM


ok, I'm putting this one on top again for the blondes ... Nice job Toe ...
Menage Numero Trois
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30 posted 1999-11-10 09:28 AM


*yawning*
did someone say my name?
ohh I see......
Hey Toe, ya ain't never been first, last or in the middle with me. And I ain't no blonde darling, I'm a red head through and through.

J'aime grignoter sur Toerags plongé en sauce à caramel.

Balladeer m'introduit des erreurs pour tests juste parfois, mais le garçon de l'cOh de garçon est lui une chose sexy.

~Trey

Toerag
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31 posted 1999-11-10 09:46 AM


I could call JTF to be sure this is correct, but what the heck?

Menage Trois....Bonbon, vous pouvez grignoter sur que n'importe quoi Toerag a!

RainbowGirl
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32 posted 1999-11-10 09:50 AM


ROFL @ nibbling...*g*

HUGS

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Toerag
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33 posted 1999-11-10 09:55 AM


Rainbow...I hope I didn't tell her she could nibble on my pickup truck or something?...Did I?...LOL
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34 posted 1999-11-10 10:11 AM



ohh vous sexy diable!!!!!




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vous pouvez penser que vous me connaissez mais vous faites? Je ne suis pas qui vous vous attendez à ce que je soit

RainbowGirl
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35 posted 1999-11-10 10:14 AM


Toe: Well you gave permission for a nibble anywhere so I guess that includes the pick up truck...ROFL

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

JTF
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36 posted 1999-11-11 11:52 AM


ROFL ... MN3 and Toe, I'm gonna give you French lessons ... sorry pals but you need them !! ...
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37 posted 1999-11-11 11:58 AM


Hey Toe - "maybe" first, "never" last, but sure as shooting, "always!"
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38 posted 1999-11-11 12:02 PM


That's right, Toe-scalawag-rag - you are First at being Fourth... now step aside and let a real sailor take charge - lol

Andrew Scott
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39 posted 1999-11-11 02:07 PM


??? First? Where the heck have I been. Damn this work for getting in the way. Well, whether you were first or fourth or any other number it was fun to read yours and everybody elses. Wish I understood French!
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40 posted 1999-11-13 06:56 PM


Does me count as being a bwond? I'z got wellow featers me tinks dat counts.


Michael
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41 posted 1999-11-14 05:31 AM


Ah, Toe, I knew I should have deleted this post...now look, you keep this up and we'll be needing Open Poetry #5 soon...jeeze.


Michael

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