Balladeer
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Member Seraphic
since 06-05-99
Posts 23595
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
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26 posted 06-26-2010 08:52 PM
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There's my Alison!!!! Nicely done, girl. You followed the song well and it was very, very clever. I like it! 
I tried that one, too. 
A ride through the valley
With my girlfriend Sally
A day of romance on my mind.
The wind blowing gently
The hum of my Bently
Left all of my cares way behind.
And then, without warning,
A thing so alarming..
My front wheel wobbled like hell.
It came off the chassis
My eyes got all glassy
As I watched it roll down the dell.
You picked a fine time to leave me, loose wheel.
I felt vibrations but thought "No big deal".
I should have known not to leave you alone
When I heard those ball bearings squeal.
You picked a fine time to leave me, loose wheel.
Now Sally was screaming
I thought I was dreaming
As I watched that tire roll away.
My car still went faster
Toward certain disaster
And all I could do was to pray.
The edge of the cliff came
And that was the ball game
As out into space we both flew.
The end of the thrill ride
And all through the hillside
My words echoed loudly and true.
You picked a fine time to leave me, loose wheel.
I should have fixed you but I'm a schlemiel.
Now me and Sally are part of the valley
Looks like our destiny's sealed
You picked a fine time to leave me, loose wheel.
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