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25 posted 01-06-2010 03:17 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Well, this challenge has made quite an impact on my daily journal.  I have made space to talk to me about things LOL, and it is working out just great!
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26 posted 01-06-2010 10:11 PM       View Profile for Oklahoma Rose   Email Oklahoma Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Oklahoma Rose

You all did great. I do get to drop in from time to time.

I really enjoyed reading you Balladeer!
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27 posted 01-06-2010 11:28 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Alison, you done good! You gave both sides and I could feel the sincerity in your words...nicely done.

ps...boiled eggs in the cold cream jar? Did you REALLY???????
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28 posted 01-06-2010 11:42 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

uh huh



Not my fault no one found it at Easter.
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29 posted 01-07-2010 03:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

What a devil you are, er, must have been!
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30 posted 02-02-2010 10:53 AM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

I saw this and I wanted to try so here was my attempt.
Hello me, hello me?

"Hello, I'm here
Life ahead may get tough
All you gotta do is come near."
I said when the line came up

"Get up and stop being so lazy
Help your mom
Studying is much to easy."

"Hello, you reached pizza hut
How can I help you?
Don’t be such a nut!
Oh and again tell me who."

“Always joking around.
Take things serious for once
You never like hounds
This is the biggest of them all
My hunch.”

“You’ll get greedy
You’ll feel alone
You are a person that’s needy
You’re home.”

“You’re a little late there buckaroo
I don’t have many friends
I’m still waiting to know who
Everyone is just an hen”

“I’m always alone
School’s is like gay
I stay at home
HAY!”
I said to the other me.

I wanted to tell her
Her heart would be broken
She’d be teased
She would try things
That she would regret

I went to speak
But I was too late
The line went dead
I wanted to tell her
She would forever be loved
And missed…

* I think I lost it just a bit *

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31 posted 02-02-2010 11:59 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hello, KatVern!  Thank you for joining in. Yes, you lost it in several places but you saved everything with the last two stanzas...an excellent ending. Nice to meet you...
 
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