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Welcome cauchy3 & beautyincalvary

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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 11-30-2009 08:36 AM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1


Welcome to PIP, my wayward friends
where proper posting all depends
on etiquette and certain rules
this worshop's an "informal" school
wherein our "teacher" Balladeer alone decides
on where it is each posting that you make resides

One must assume that since you're new
such subtleties eluded you
assignments which we pactice here
get handed out by Balladeer
and subsequently graded on the "workshop curve"
( though some would say more harshly than what most deserve )

I hope these guidelines serve you well
should you decide to stay a spell
I think you'll find this friendly place
will suit you fine , but just in case
there shouldn't be any reason you'd have to dispute
these words of welcome crafted and wrapped up to boot.

Doc
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1 posted 11-30-2009 10:18 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

You make me smile.



I add my welcomes and hope you both join in the lessons.

A
Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 11-30-2009 01:00 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Alison,
Thanks. I usually check in daily and kept waiting for Balladeer to transfer their poems to open ( as he usually does )then decided since they were still here, to have a little fun with it. Hopefully all is well
with Deer and he's just taking it easy recovering. All the same I may have to send out a search party if he doesn't show up soon.
Doc

BTW, this is not an example of "wrapped refain" as while it does follow the syllable counts, rhyme scheme, and six line stanza format, it does not repeat the first four syllables verbatim ( thought I might smoke Balladeer out of hiding with that one, lol )
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (12-01-2009 08:00 AM).]

 
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